How bittersweet. I love how sad it is at the beginning, gets to a point of light, and then somewhere in between.

Critics call it "riveting".

so beautiful and real ^^ thank you for a great story!

i liked it. i thought it was sweat. i don't see why it would be sad. they're together now. good job!
~*~HGS~*~

oh wow...you put a lot into just this one small chapter. it was absolutely amazing. im a fan of 2nd pov, written it myself, and though people always start of complaining about it, i feel like it makes the story more personal. I like the way you wrote it. The emotion was good...I love this sort of plot but the directness of this was fantastic. Very sad but true. I don't know what else to say. It was good.

I liked it. :] kudos. Peace.

I really like the simplicity of the story, especially how the ending mirrors the beginning introduction.

I did catch a little typo in the third paragraph, where you wrote "That's now I feel right now..." It should be "That's how". :D

Awws. That was so cute. I'm happy it wasn't sad :P

aw, it's sweet. i like them, they're so sweet. i just randomly found this and i was like, aw. it's sweet. :)

good imagery with the whole pain thing, too.

i like it..kinda sweet and romantic..feel all tingly inside..~~

This is adorable! Really cute!

I really liked this! It was short and cute, and I did find it sad in the beginning. ^^ I hope they stay together... :)

THIS IS AMAZING! It sounds so realistic!

yeh i do like it, and the spin completely caught me off guard. good job, hope you write more

Another one of your heartfelt little shennanagins, but I have to say my favourite line was 'thank god you have no f*ing decency'; because it was ironic that only what...five minutes ago he was pretending to read a book.

Again, your repetition is nice BECAUSE YOU USE IT CORRECTLY. You do not abuse it and kill it dead until it needs to be reincarnated, so thank you for that.

I liked the mini-flashback because you don't separate it with the italics and all that, you make it natural and slotted it in with everything else.

You're writing is powerful in a way, because you make it seem as if you will never be afraid to not say things.

Thank you for writing this.

C: It wasn't much of a sad story...well, it was a little sad I suppose. But it was also very sweet and I really liked it.