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| Bloodfeeder94 2008-06-28 ch 1,  | abuseTHIS IS AMAZING! It sounds so realistic! |
| crimson-reverie 2008-06-28 ch 1, | abuseyeh i do like it, and the spin completely caught me off guard. good job, hope you write more |
| chibibble 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseAnother one of your heartfelt little shennanagins, but I have to say my favourite line was 'thank god you have no f*ing decency'; because it was ironic that only what...five minutes ago he was pretending to read a book. Again, your repetition is nice BECAUSE YOU USE IT CORRECTLY. You do not abuse it and kill it dead until it needs to be reincarnated, so thank you for that. I liked the mini-flashback because you don't separate it with the italics and all that, you make it natural and slotted it in with everything else. You're writing is powerful in a way, because you make it seem as if you will never be afraid to not say things. Thank you for writing this. |
| PindrakeCake 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseC: It wasn't much of a sad story...well, it was a little sad I suppose. But it was also very sweet and I really liked it. |
| gummybearmurder 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseLike it? I loved this. It was just so damn cute. Lol, well done. |
| Duuude 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuseWee. I like it this way even though it was supposed to be sad.. I'll also like the abrupt way Chris said he wanted to kiss him.. It was cute. The main character was cute.. I'm a lot taller than him, I'd like to mention proudly. Hehe. I wonder.. in guy-girl relationships.. the male's always taller, right? Well how about in guy-guy or girl-girl.. I guess it doesn't really matter. But it does seem to me that the cutesy-wootsy ones are always shorter, in the case the main character. Anyway.. I'll stop analyzing things and look for another story to read. I'm really bored. I remember reading another of your stories.. Burning Paper Houses, right? It was amazing, I'd like to say that again. If that story isn't by you, although I'm pretty sure it is, ignore me. XD Keep writing. Cause your stories are always good, I'm sure many agree. =] |
| A.K.A. Writer's Block 2007-12-16 ch 1, | abuseI've decided that you're just a generally godlike writer. Hmm. Love, aka. |
| rosexofxflame 2007-11-20 ch 1, | abuseaww! this is so adorible! good work! |
| sealion ryann 2007-10-24 ch 1, | abuseI really, really enjoyed it :) I can relate :/ |
| theapathycrusade 2007-10-18 ch 1, | abuseIt was a little sad...kind of bittersweet, you know? Loved the way you wrote it, and the tense you used. Really, really interesting. One of my favorite one-shots. Great job. |
| AnimeAngelRiku 2007-10-16 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful, very pretty. I loved it! |
| renn 2007-10-12 ch 1, anon. | abusecute! XP sorry for the lame comment, it's very late and I'm very dead |
| ess3sandra 2007-09-19 ch 1, | abusemy first slash ive read, this is sweet! |
| AmorphousHeart 2007-08-20 ch 1, | abuseThat was so beautiful. You are an amazing writer. :) |
| Harley Quinn Davidson 2007-06-30 ch 1, | abuseI am intrigued and would like to see what happens are they going to get names? |