Great story, keep up the good work.

HI ^^
omg!! love your story, so cute love all the charecter
ofcourse Adreyan the best
Thank you for writing such a lovely story ^_^

Beautifully written!
Kept me on the edge of my seat all the way through!!

I hope there's a sequel!
(Maybe you've written it already, and I just haven't spotted it yet, lol)

Anyway, fab story guys! Keep up the good work!

Ok! So, thrity chapters and an epilogue later, I'm reviewing. I usually don't review until the story is over and this one is over. I really enjoyed it. Very sweet and a great twist with the plots. I love the characters. They all have a voice and they all have something that makes them real. I enjoyed Gage's father, Dag's ex, and everything else. I'm glad that Halen isn't as horrid as he seemed. It was very original and very interesting. Enjoyed it a lot!
Kiwi

College is spelled wrong in the first chapter like five times. You spelled it collage. Its sesame street not sesame park and you must really like guys in muscle shirts which i assume are wifebeaters. It seems like everyone and their dog wears muscle shirts in this story. Maybe next time you should change it up a little. Also it seems like there are no fat guys anywhere. Totally unrealistic. i'm kidding about the fat guy thing cause who wants to read about fat guys getting it on. Adrayens character isn't that likable. We are supposed to wnat him to not die or get raped and want him to get revenge but in the story hes either portrayed as a sissy/crybaby or and airheaded hyper ADD kid. It is tolerable but annoying. Maybe he should be serious and strong occasionally so that it doesn't seem like hes so utterly incompetant. Imean he is 21 and he does live by himself so its not realistic or interesting for him to be the fool all the time. Also, dag rolls his eyes too much. Its seems like most times he does it for absolutely nothing or he just really likes rolling his eyes. I don't even know if you still read reviews for this since its finished but maybe my comments may be of some help in the future.I'm not saying the story is horrible because obviously I wouldn't have read this much but it needs some work.

I have read this story 3 times in the past week - yes, from beginning to end - and I'll probably re-read it again and again. This story is AWESOME and I love your characters! This is by far one of my all time fave stories! The only bad thing I can say, well, actually 2 things, and they are:

1)The story is complete! *sniff* I hope you consider a sequel in the future.

2)It's too bad that it's not in print! I would certainly buy it! ^_^

I'm glad to be one of the many fans you have who enjoy your writing.

I'm re-reading this story again and I just felt like sharing Adreyan's line about nuts and the squirell, I remember after the first time I read I used that line on one of my friends. I thought it was hularious. Ehem. Going to finish the story again now.

BRAVO!BRAVO! I absolutly loved it! Your an awesome writer! =D

This story is great so far. I like how you mix the past and the present and I like how you bring in the conflicts. They don't seem forced or unbelievable. Good job.

I couldn't stop reading your story, it was that good. I fell in love with most of your characters, barring Chris and Gage's father. However, I believe that "Fallen Angels" would be a better title, because the story is not just about Andreyan and Dag, it's about the whole cast. Great job and keep writing!!

I've already finished reading this story and I adore it, but I thought you should know you've got a lot fo your facts wrong regarding college. It sounds like Dag and Gage are attending a four year college, meaning they should get their degrees in about four years.

As for Dirk, I don't know where you got the idea that someone graduates at 26/27 with a degree in fashion design, but you are very wrong. Fashion design should definitly only take four years, less if he went to a community or business college instead of a four-year university.

Dag and Gage would both probably be graduating at the end of this story if they had difficulty choosing majors or took a light credit load most years. Unless someone is pre-med or pre-law, where they got to med or law school for three more years after getting their undergraduate degree or continue school to get their masters, most people graduate in four years at a four year college.

This is just so you are informed and know what you are writing about when it comes to college-attending characters.

No!! Vance is breaking the name scheme! All of the other Fallen Angels have Y's in both thier first and last names!!

Why is Gage speaking Spanish when in chapter 1 you told us he was Italian?

It's college, not collage. A college is a school for advanced learning. A collage is an arrangement of pictures usually magazine clippings.

Sweet! Poor Dag I think he wants Adreyan more than he wants to admit. Sigh... Love! I'm glad the Fallen Angels are probably gonna have a new member. I wonder what Dag is gonna do to Halen. Whatever it is i can't wait. Sigh..I must get off, Mom says I have to clean my room. Mothers! Anywho Au Revoir!