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| Darcy 2006-09-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery nice. I can relate to this, kinda. |
| **tom** 2006-03-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story! got a bf? |
| Pick Me, Pick Me 2005-04-11 ch 1,  | abusewow, that's really good. I love the rhyming, I usually have trouble with that. Keep up the good work. |
| Draven DarkCrow 2005-01-10 ch 1, | abuseWell written, I like it. xoEmotional-Nightmare |
| Infinity Plus One 2004-12-03 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed this poem. Good rhyming scheme and rhythym (spelling?). I am not very good on emotional poems, but I can see that this is very well written! Well done. |
| Keith Andrew 2004-12-02 ch 1, | abuseokay one word-Excellent. I love this, so much emotion and all of it portrayed so well, really cool-Keith Andrew |
| Kantessa 2004-12-02 ch 1, | abuseThat's a very sweet poem. It could be lengthened though, maybe make the subject a little clearer. But it's good Abstract too. |