 Darcy 2006-09-26 . chapter 1 Very nice. I can relate to this, kinda. |
 **tom** 2006-03-27 . chapter 1 Great story! got a bf? |
 Pick Me, Pick Me 2005-04-11 . chapter 1wow, that's really good. I love the rhyming, I usually have trouble with that. Keep up the good work. |
 Draven DarkCrow 2005-01-10 . chapter 1Well written, I like it.
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 Infinity Plus One 2004-12-03 . chapter 1I enjoyed this poem. Good rhyming scheme and rhythym (spelling?). I am not very good on emotional poems, but I can see that this is very well written! Well done. |
 Keith Andrew 2004-12-02 . chapter 1okay one word-Excellent. I love this, so much emotion and all of it portrayed so well, really cool-Keith Andrew |
 Kantessa 2004-12-02 . chapter 1That's a very sweet poem. It could be lengthened though, maybe make the subject a little clearer. But it's good Abstract too. |