hey twister, this was all good. you've got a good writing style and what an imagination! can you write about aries please i think you'll do a good job with that. peace up A town!

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Ashley

Yay! I'm happy this excellent story is back on fictionpress! You're not the only one to borrow a friend's characters on this website. Besides, everybody in this story is so well characterized. Great job! And again, yay for Juneau and Andante!

Yay! It's back on again! Let's hope this time that Fictionpress exhibits a little bit more intelligence this time and realize that this is still ORIGINAL work, yet we derived the fanfiction because the characters and setting was borrowed from another author with their valid permission. Example...

I GAVE TERRYLL T. PRESTON, AKA STILL2TWISTED, FULL AND UNDENIABLE PERMISSION TO HAVE CREATED THIS WONDERFUL STORY THAT SHOULDN'T HAVE BEEN TAKEN OFF IN THE FIRST PLACE BECAUSE OF A STUPID MISUNDERSTANDING AND IF YOU TAKE THIS OFF AGAIN, THEN I'M GOING TO TRACK YOU ALL DOWN!

Hmph. Anyway, sorry for that little rant there, this is good stuff as usual, and I loved it all, to the great prose and you managed to keep all my characters in character! Yay! You made Lavoisier a complete, yet eloquent, bastard! Whee!! And Juneau is also idealistic and has his own ideas about how the Archipelian clan should be. Muahaha. This is very cool. So very cool. I love your style, and I'm stunned speechless by the sheer awesomeness and majesty of this piece.

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