I love this poem. It reminds me of one of my friends I used to like, which turned out the same way. It's a great poem, though some people may not get it as well unless they've experienced it themselves.

lovely!

i am back lol no but this poem is so good i j=know what you mean when you write this it is so hard to tell them especially if there your best friend!

Woah. That's creepily relatable for me, but highly awesome! The construction is marvelous, and the rhyme scheme rocks for this kind of poem! Really awesome job with the description; it nails this situation right on the head! Keep it up!

Oh my gosh. One of my friends is going through that exact same thing right now. I have too and it sucks! You don't need to fix this poem! It's fine just the way it is!

Good images there. I know a little of what you mean too. I have been in the same situation. Nice rhythm. I thought it ended a bit quickly though. Good work. I liked it.

This is fantastic. Another poem that I can totally relate to, especially the end. Your writing is great.

Aw! i know how you feel here! It's a really deep, well laid out poem!

I like this one too! You write good poems!

Tell this person what they mean to you! They have to know- maybe you're not being as obvious as you think you are. Wonderful poem- loved it!

Irie work. I think you write about things that everyone can deal with, and people like that. I do, too...good job!

Great, God don't you hate it when stuff like that happens. and how come it always seems to backfire in your face. This is really well done, the emotions expressed were very real and accurate and the structure and technigue is excellent-Keith Andrew

I know how that one is... he's my best friend and that's the way he'll always see me.. as a friend nothing more... I hide when he speaks of his love for another... it hurts when he does...

I so know how that feels.. *nods*

Heyi know how you feel. i like someone right now, and well...to be quite honest i'm not attractive or anything. I try being nice to him but i don't think he really cares...either that or he just wants to torture me. But whatever the reason, i know how it feels to like someone when they barely know you exist. Nice job. Keep it up, girl.Sol Ana Iliara