I like it. It's really simple and that's great.

Hm... This is very simple. The language is very basic. The rhyme scheme works well though. This poem wasn't bad, but I think you could perhaps make an extended version of this.

~Cirien Phoenix

Goregous, very Doreen Valiente.

You used all the elements well. ROCK ON SISTA! :D

hey sistah, this is so cute! How come I haven't seen it? I probably have, I just forgot...>_< ^_^ Anyway, I'll try and remember to write it down/use it, I love it!