This is so bittersweet...and the last stanza is obviously something only you can understand I think, but the rest is perfectly clear and full of meaning...sad in a way, but then it gets hopeful :). Good work! Love, Mia

Like a lot of your works, this was very melancholy and sad, but hopeful. I really liked it. It was very insightful, and I love your style. Keep writing!

so sad... but well written