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Reviews For: Soul Searching: The Bathroom Wall Guide

Half-BloodGrlPirate
2007-02-28
ch 4,
abusethat was awesome and i loved it! and i'm grinning like an idiot this was fantabulous (do you like the word? i think it's my 1st time using it) alright, BYE!

b.j./Half-BloodGrlPirate
Sanako-chan
2005-01-24
ch 3, anon.
abuseThis was just great! Kyle is hilarious. You didn't lie when you said you were good at developing characters. I'm so proud to have you as a big sis... no matter how annoying you can get. Well I'm to lazy to review your story, On The Roof Again, but just to let you know... I liked it. ^^ So hurry up and update... no more rping for you! :P
sabrinasays
2004-12-22
ch 3,
abuseheehee. interesting concept. I like kyle, but if I ran into him in a bathroom, I think I'd be a little weirded out. can't wait to read the last chapter.
sesshomaru1986
2004-12-22
ch 1,
abuseit great
SatisfyAnEmptyInside
2004-12-21
ch 3,
abuseKyle's so weird...and I love him. Heh. So, next chapter he'll meet someone he really likes, correct? Add REALLY soon.
Porn Yesterday
2004-12-21
ch 3,
abuseWowzers, I love Kyle he's so damn funny and cute ::wide smile:: ^^ Y'know after reading this, I may just do the Kyle thing and go find a public washroom to learn a few life lessons ::sheepish smile:: Meh, my parents would kill me if I did, but this sounds fun and just...cool! I love Kyle's personality though, especially the interactions with Peter, Aubrey, Owen and Louis-yeah you're fleshing his character out very well I say! I can't wait for the last chapter, I hope Jake comes along or something of the sort...or not, I know it'll work out either way! I'll be impatiently waiting. ::impatient:: -.-
Lar-lar
2004-12-11
ch 2,
abuseMaybe I'm just strange, but camping out in a bathroom to meet new people actually sounds like a pretty productive idea. I mean, you'd meet a lot of different types of people (which you have demonstrated already) wouldn't you?!I LOVE Kyle! He's just fantastical! He seems like a lot of fun, if kinda mean sometimes... But I won't hold that against him, he's interesting and I LOVE interesting ^_^I definitely want to read more of this and I *will* review your other stuff too, as soon as I get my phone lines all sorted again *sighs* It might take a while, but I'll get there! Laters ^_^
rainbowskye
2004-12-05
ch 1,
abuseThat was very much amusing, and it's a fun idea, with a great main character.. who may be slightly insane, but that just adds to his charm, hehe. Hope you update soon.
SilentFyre
2004-12-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseAh, I definately loved it. The whole storyline is amusing and the prospect of 'camping out' in a bathroom intrigues me. You give such beautiful ideas to crazed minds.

I just adore Kyle. His wit and charm would make a great pal for myself. I like his line of thinking as well, even if it is a bit eccentric.

Now, if you do not hurry and write more on this story, my poor little mind will just have to entertain possible endings. We truly don't want *me* to be thinking of these, now would we?
Rae1
2004-12-04
ch 1,
abuseI love the fact that Kyle is prepared to CAMP-OUT in the bathroom. That fact makes me laugh.

He's -mean- and ornery and just very fun. I feel almost bad for poor Peter, but I think he's as likely to call Kyle as Kyle is to call him.

Meeting people in the bathroom? ^__^ That's very lovely. Very entertaining. I wish him the best of luck, and I can't wait for Jake to find him. That should be an interesting conversation, though I think Jake will be the least surprised person who runs into Kyle.
MorphineReverie
2004-12-03
ch 1,
abuseAhh! XD; I love it. *hearts* I find Kyle strangely funny. Perhaps a bit- ... okay, REALLY, stuck up towards Peter and others 'below' him. Or, that could just be how he gets peoples goats. *huggles a goat plushie* Anyways, I like it much-o. Update, woman! XD;
Ambivalence
2004-12-03
ch 1,
abuseA bathroom? What a place for a vacation, lol! Kyle's so strange, but in such a cute/funny way that it's impossible not to like him. I hope to read more soon about his little 'adventure' and hopefully something about his past or relationship with Jake. Great job with the characters! ^_^
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