Reviews for Revolt of the Caretakers

La Gitane 2005-09-05 ch 1,	abuseVery incisive, and very true. Your use of bolding, italicising and underlinging is very effective here too, and I can only applaud your cutting comments. Maybe I should print this out and stick it on all the bathroom walls in my school - perhaps they'd stop engraving such rubiish into toilet doors then. Great poem. Great, uh, social commentary. ;)
grim-dreamer 2005-03-03 ch 1,	abuseInteresting how you've emphasised parts of the poem in italics and bold and even underlining! The caretakers at my school were worked to the bone. Great poem, though 'Then less than weeks after' is a bit confusing?
Shadow Gryphon 2005-02-17 ch 1,	abuseYeah, vandalism sucks. And then we don't get anything good... sighs
Stories-have-souls 2005-01-22 ch 1,	abuseWow, I had to check your profile out after reading that complaint letter, now I have to put you down as a favourite author...VERY GOOD POEM, MAKES A LOT OF SENSE.
Cyssel 2004-12-04 ch 1,	abusewonderful poetry there! i thoroughly enjoyed this.
Joshwales 2004-12-04 ch 1,	abuseIt's good I think you should write more
Ashley Brook 2004-12-03 ch 1,	abuseGood job! Impressive!
Allaesandra 2004-12-03 ch 1,	abusethis is not the sort of poetry I usually read. The verses flow well and the point is put across well. I especially like the lines 'do express yourself freely but do it elsewhere' Good work
Faithless Juliet 2004-12-03 ch 1,	abuseFascinating display of emotions.Keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet.