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zakei 2007-05-17 ch 2,	abuseLOLSY. KEEP WRITING! you had me laughing so hard about naomi there. :D tries to imagine her that way UH. shakes head in a befuddled manner i can't get it. LOL. keep writing! write write write!! its motivation! and if you don't write, i won't give you a.. a uh.. a cookie! hops away with the cookie jar nyah!! unless you write! grabs all the milk in the fridge too anyway so i can eat them with the cookies~ CIAO! :D
zakei 2007-05-17 ch 1,	abuseHMS. nice. but. abit dark. like theres that uncheerful undertone which is SO NOT jules. sighy. oh well. i'll keep reading. you're my favourite authour on the net btw, at least for the next month/+ (:
Liviania 2007-01-02 ch 2,	abuseActually, required courses vary, especially when the university is private and not public. It's awesome to get to see the characters younger. Especially Seth acting incompetent . . . ^_~ Livi
selkiewings 2006-12-20 ch 1,	abuseThis piece is a dream come true, for me. Always wanted more on Juno and Suu. Beautiful, as always.
moi 2006-07-23 ch 2, anon.	abuseYAY! good ficcy. please continue... or i might die w/o something good to read. twitch i cant really think of anything to critique you on... but you used the characters seth and naomi from fox trail differently this time?
Daughter-of-Louis 2006-07-01 ch 1,	abusethis is a great story and I wish I could write that well--damn! I am going to go on and read Fox Trail tho because now I'm very interested. I found the previous reviews to be quite funny but still quite rude, but one can't help the ignorance of others. Ah well, great story I'm looking foward to reading more of it :D I'm addin ya to author alert list. G'day. Taco feel free to check out my stuff if you'd like I havent updated in awhile tho :\
Kleptomaniacal Tendencies 2006-06-15 ch 2,	abuseWell, 'sweetie', you could have said that perfectly well without being a condescending, patronizing ** about it. But that you for the education, I rather appreciate it. Learn something new everyday right? Well today I learned two things. Perhaps you wouldn't have to be a narcisist or quai-neurotic if you treated people with a bit more curtesy.
Kleptomaniacal Tendencies 2006-06-15 ch 1,	abuseSorry for the disappointment, but I didn't actually read the chapter. Your narcisisstic moment was too much for me. However you should know, so that other people don't laugh like I did that you spelled 'Filipino' wrong. It's Phillipino, I believe because it's the Phillipines.
Lady DreamWriter 2005-12-07 ch 2,	abusenice filler, adds a bit more depth and realism to the story, hope to see the next chapter soon
Lady DreamWriter 2005-12-07 ch 1,	abusewow, this is pretty cool. Can't wait to read the second chapter.
Hollie Daye 2005-04-22 ch 2,	abuse"...his naked behind jutting out like a proud hill..." ...this particular line of description amused me. ^_~ This story definitely has a different tone from Fox Trail. I like it! I look forward with how you develop Julian's character within the context of this world. The setting at the bar is a nice contrast from what I would imagine Harvard's campus being like. I appreciate the gritty feel you've given to everything. Seth's introduction made me smile. The description, as always, is fabulous. You paint everything out like a meticulous, vivid scene, a task that is not easy to accomplish. Your attention to little details, which give away hints of personality quirks for the characters, are fun and amusing. I'm not sure of where you are taking this story, but that isn't a bad thing. It's still early, and I imagine things are about to heat up with Naomi now on duty to protect Julian's fabulous body ^_~.
tenshi Nekos 2005-03-15 ch 2,	abuseOMG OMG >< naomi sounds completely different! i wonder wut happened there. i think i mite like her now... i hated her before! >
pomegranate sky 2005-03-13 ch 2,	abuseYay! A chappie! Um, typo: you described Naomi as an "overworked ." It seemed like you put a space in on purpose to come back to but then forgot about it. I didn't find this chapter boring at all. It was all really amusing, and I was really shocked when you described Naomi, because I'd always thought of her as a gun happy psychobitch. I recently read Fox Trail again, and I'd just like to say that your writing has really grown since you wrote the first chapter. All your descriptions of Juno are totally funny without being overdone, and you are one of the few authors that call pull off large blocks of writing without dialogue that I'll actually read through. Thanks for the update, and update Fox Trail soon! And get them published after you finish them while working or in law school or what not. Congrats on getting accepted to UP school of law.
brevis 2005-03-12 ch 2,	abusewow. another great chapter. Seth was hilarious, might I add. And Naomi's personality certainly comes as a shock. Looking forward to more. by the way, congratulations on finishing college. :) For me, it's pretty much a long way off. I'm only thirteen. ^^ happy writing, and can I add how much I LOVE juno?
Emerald Serpentt 2005-03-11 ch 2,	abuseHey. You reviewed one of my uber-old stories that I posted just for fun almost two years ago, but since at the time I didn't really hang around fp.com much, I never got around to returning the favor... Though I do remember reading Fox Trail at one point. It's very, very well written, btw, but I'm a little embarrassed to admit that I never really got into Kira and Tai much, so I didn't really keep track of it. That is most definitely not to say your story is not good (because that is far, Far, FAR from the truth). It's really just a personal thing, I think. (I mean, come on, it must have been good, for me to still remember... ^_^) But, I did like Julian. And Naomi. And Seth. (I have this tendency to like side characters more than protagonists... NO idea WHY.) Er, yeah. So when I noticed this little side story, I just knew I would love it. And you really are being unfair to yourself when you say this chapter is boring. Cuz it's not. Bah. :-P I love Naomi's entrance into the story. And the other scenes are quite vivid and amusing. Hm... Yes, chem is usually an option for the science requirement. But what happened to all the science geeks in that scene? XD Cuz at least from my experience, unless it's a very very introductory level course, or one of those science-for-non-science-majors classes, at least half of the students in a science class like chem are total nerds. If not most. (Ahem. Myself included. LOL.) I was almost expecting at least a few of the students to complain about class being cancelled or something... XD But either way, the Seth-bullying, though VERY amusing, did strike me as a little out of place in a college setting. People tend to ignore each other (especially in a large lecture course. and this would be even more true in a big university like Harvard)... though this is again from my own experience. Unless he made a really spectacular entrance. But I couldn't exactly tell for sure -- did he trip or did they push him down or something? That part wasn't too clear, tho of course it's from Julian's perspective, so it would make sense if he didn't notice, I guess. LOL, poor Seth though. (Although I can probably name a few actual professors I've known who actually WOULD fall for something like that...) Yeah, I should quit rambling. Happy writing! (And congrats for your upcoming graduation!)

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