This is exceedingly excellent! I love it! You have developed the Blond character really well...I like him alot. And I really like the way you portrayed some of your story in Kiyo's view...which I like. I am not good at writing at the views of one of my characters so I commend you for your talents at it.

Write more!

sugarplumfairie

Great story! It's perked my interest. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. ^_^

Jeese! Would someone else review this for crying out loud!? It's gold I tell You! Pure Gold, Baby!

Keep it comin' my main man!!