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| marshbar960 2005-12-09 ch 1,  | abuseyes together we can make it home. thanks for sharing and keep writing! p.s. God loves you and so do I! |
| innzie 2005-05-08 ch 1, | abuseThat's a lovely poem! it's short but you can't really add anymore...it's great the way it is. short poems are the best ^^ good work. Innzie X |
| catseyeview 2004-12-20 ch 1, | abusebeautiful, I love this one. |
| David J. Bloch 2004-12-14 ch 1, | abuseA ship in calm waters always has a great captain, but no matter how good he or she is once a storm hits it is up to everyone on that ship to keep it going. We've lost sight of that somewhere . . . anyway, enough of my ramblings. It's short, but then again it doesn't need any more explaination. Good stuff! (By the way, thanks for reviewing my poem. Belayed thanks but better late than never, huh?) |
| Moon-Chaser 2004-12-14 ch 1, | abuseVery True, very simple I love it! Keep it up |
| scudcrow 2004-12-03 ch 1, | abuseA great truth simply put. Namely, two heads are better than one, three better than two, so on and so forth as long as they collectively work towards a goal. Guess thats the practical part of it; what I meant to say is that let two hearts beat together and watch all ways melt into one: "All under heaven"--Tao Te Ching. |
| Manuel Fajar 2004-12-03 ch 1, | abuseVery, very true. Nice. m |