this was good. keep up the good work and writing.

weird. a meaningful little story, though. i have to admit, though, your summary really caught me. who's favorite things AREN'T fire and sex?

just kidding. but this was quite interesting.

i like this...i caught a few typos and what not...but over all i think this was pretty good...the emotions were very real and well written. ^_^

Wow, how odd that i pick this of your stories to read. Very well written. Definantly understand the love of fire.

i really

wow. thats all i can say. wow. that was fantastic! ur a gr8 writer! man i wish i could write like that!::Alex::