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| laughter at the funeral 2006-04-15 ch 1,  | abusei can really relate to this...going back to some old places and feeling the nostalgia does make you feel weird...that last line is really powerful...very well done...and pls, review some of my poems if you have the time...thanks... truly yours... |
| Flaran 2006-03-04 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is exactly the feeling you get about these types of things. I think that going back to the past is hard because of these 'shrunken' memories that you are no longer able to fit to your life. |
| Teufel66 2006-02-12 ch 1, | abuseThis piece holds so much meaning and wisdom. great job. i love it. |
| Theory Of The 4th Dimension 2005-09-11 ch 1, | abuseWoah. Nice and deep. This means alot. The ever disappearing streets of ou childhood. I guess its hard to have the same,old feeling to an old memory. |
| The tribes tale 2005-04-24 ch 1, | abuseWonderful imagrey especially with the clothes in the closet! Sure makes me think alot! I wish i could write this good. Over all awesome poem! |
| Xavier Everett 2005-04-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is a great poem. Short, but very meaningful. |
| Cry Tears of Darkness 2005-03-21 ch 1, | abusemm high school reunion... not smthg im looking forward to, lol! ah well. nice piece again |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-01-27 ch 1, | abuseIt's always an odd feeling to go back to some place that once was like your second home. Your poem captured the essence of that. Thank you for your comments, I appreciate them! |
| MonarchsCry 2005-01-26 ch 1, | abuseoH, its Good, but a better range of vocabulary would seem more meaningful, sorry if I offended in any way... |
| katmonkey 2005-01-17 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem, the last two lines are especially good. |
| white-clouds 2005-01-05 ch 1, | abuseHigh school reunions aren't all bad, are they? Great piece! |
| philoslove 2004-12-22 ch 1, | abuseI think the last two line were really fitting. The constant reminder that everything seems to be shrunken, was expressed very plainly yet in a pretty way, there. |
| Siberia1 2004-12-13 ch 1, | abuseOh, a very clever piece! The ideas you come up with are always so fascinating. |
| Silver Phoenix Falling 2004-12-05 ch 1, | abuseNice poem! I really like the way you put a reflection on a memory such that it seems almost timeless. ...if that made any sense. Anyway, I loved the poem! I'm adding it to my favorites, if you don't mind. |
| East-0f-Eden 2004-12-03 ch 1, | abuseI'm in high school and I'm never going back for the reunion. To many bad memories! |