Very nice! The narrator shows a display of confusion and panic, is this what you wanted to come across when you were writing this?

Is there any kind of symbolism with the Atomic dust and the Iodine candy? I think it's quite interesting.

(PS. I found this link on your FanFiction.net profile. This is Mattias from there. :) )

Very nice poem!

Beautiful abstract imagry, you discribed sociaty now as the great Picaso might have painted it had he been alive.