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Reviews For: Origin of Eternity
Aimee Raven 2005-08-23 . chapter 1
Oh..nice :)..very smooth and gets you thinking...Love, Mia
AntiPleasure 2005-01-16 . chapter 1
Your little pieces like this make me smile. I've missed talking to you. I hope you're alright. *hugs*

Jenna xoxo
Eirien 2004-12-12 . chapter 1
Nicely done, i agree with my previous reviewer, the cycle you create by linking one thing to the other and letting it all flow into "sharing" again is a really good idea.
simpleplan13 2004-12-06 . chapter 1
hmm itnerestin gI liek how you did that.. using the last word of every line to make it work and flow... ncie job
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