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| Nyte Tym Starr 2004-12-07 ch 1,  | abusegood poem..to capture the true meaing of this is truely to mostly understand the way life really is. it is not seen by most, but for those of us that do see it..it becomes a harsh reality. |
| bloody tears and sugar vien... 2004-12-06 ch 1, | abusecool poem. dark depressing, just like your profile said most of your writing is. if it makes you feel any better i think Faceless rocks. to add a bit more to you ego trip i will add it to my favorites list. |
| La Rose Negra 2004-12-03 ch 1, | abuseHello. Love the poem and the rhyming. I havent written anything in a while cuz I hvae been bogged down with papers to write. And I also have dance 5 hours a week and reciently I went to Florida with my school choir so i havent had any time! It makes me sad. I miss writing. Well I must go. ~Sam |
| lronMaiden 2004-12-03 ch 1, | abusei love the rhyme, it works very well. and so does the rhythm. Excellent structure. It's also meaninful and touching... so keep it up! don't let satire overtake, keep it at a healthy mix. |