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Anonymous-gurl 2006-10-21 ch 17,	abusei love ur story, its so good, i really hope u can update, even though i think its been over a year... dakota and sawyer are soo cute together! hope ull continue it! much love, anonymous-gurl
vintagewhitegloves 2005-08-07 ch 17,	abuseSo, I just read the whole story, and gosh did I love it. I'm such a sucker for the whole angsty girl, chivalrous man story. Sawyer is so cute, I absolutely adore him, and Brandon as well. I hope you update soon, I can't wait to see what's going to happen.
blond1w/whiskey 2005-06-27 ch 17,	abuseWas that the end?
Madcow13 2005-06-18 ch 17,	abuseI enjoyed the chapter. I like the way that Dakota couldn't tell him straight out and she even told Brandon first. It was probably slightly easier to discuss with Brandon because Sawyer's opinion matters so much to her and she wasn't sure how he would react. The fact that he is also getting into a boyfriend/girlfriend relationship with him is going to make her even more confused... Great chapter. Update again as soon as you can.
plastic figurine 2005-06-17 ch 17,	abuseAw... this was cute. One thing though, you used "Brandon" instead of "Sawyer" when Brandon was confronting Dakota. Besides that though, I really love this story. Hurry up and get the next chapter out :)
Nobody-n-Particular 2005-06-17 ch 17,	abuseAnother great chapter, just a few hasty-looking mistakes. For one, you mention Brandon "shaking" his head up and down. Well, that's nodding, and you can leave out the up and down part because that would be redundant. Then Brandon starts talking later and says "Brandon was your knight in shining armor..." I think you meant Sawyer. Besides that, it was moving emotionally. Dakota had to confront her greatest fear which was personified by Trent, and that was letting her guard down and facing the world with all its "trials and tribulations". Very nice chapter. Just fix the grammatical errors.
Paula 2005-06-16 ch 17, anon.	abuseThis is a great story. I love Dakota. She's an awesome character who makes mistakes and has fears which I find awesome. Anyway, I also love Sawyer. He's so sweet. Oh, and this line: “What? Brandon was your knight in shining armor. He rescued you from your crazy ex boyfriend… how did you screw it up?” He looked confused as he stared down at me. I think you meant to put Sawyer instead of Brandon. Lol. Update soon please!
blond1w/whiskey 2005-06-16 ch 16,	abusepoor Dakota, and Sawyer. I hope things work themselves out
plastic figurine 2005-06-09 ch 16,	abuseWoah, Trent seemed like one of those cartoon villens with evil laughs and eyes haha. Good chapter.
Madcow13 2005-06-08 ch 16,	abuseTrent is a piece of work... He always screws things up... Dakota has been thrown into a difficult situation now. I liked the chapter and I like the way Dakota's past is coming back to confront her even if she doesn't. I think this way we can se more of how she feels about what happened to her and what she wants to do about it, e.t.c. Anyhoo, great chapter. Update as soon as you can.
Madcow13 2005-06-06 ch 15,	abuseI like the story behind the plot and I like the way you've managed to get Dakota to behave realistically according to this. I also like the way that you've got several subplots with the side characters which change the tone and the way Dakota acts, e.t.c. I want to find out more about Brandon's girlfriend issues, and also where Lee ended up. Anyway, I loved this so far. Update as soon as you can!
Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-31 ch 15,	abuseFun chapter, presents a lot of questions. Need answers! Can't wait.
plastic figurine 2005-05-31 ch 15,	abuseOH juicy, and a party? Update soon!
Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-04 ch 14,	abuseWonderful, dear, honest. Very good chapter! Hope everything continues to be alright for Dakota. Update soon!
Ironhart 2005-04-13 ch 13,	abuseTHIS IS GREAT KEEP WRITING!

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