I like your description of a side of town that some people wouldn't be familiar with. Good job!

hehehe...if you tried to be serious on this...I'm sorry, but it made me snicker in the end. But it does mean alot, The stuff we gotta get passed through to reach the destination. I kinda relate.

ohmy god! crazy poetry writer! good though. you put a lot of thought into it. i oculd imagine you going down that street but maybe you didn't but that doesn't matter.

What an awesome interesting poem! The last stanza is especially awesome, and i think i know what i means:) awesome writing! the last line is sweet too!

Ooh, I like. It reminds me of when I was a kid and being dropped off at a day care -.- don't ask why.

odd how things look so different when you look at them from a new perspective... nice peiece.

wow, interesting poem~ it has that certain flow and rhythm~~ very nice~~

keep writing!

Interesting poem. I love the rhythm here.

I dont really like this style of poem, but it must be very good becasue i liked it, aside from the style. But that's just me and my wierd preferences, and it is very good. ;)~Stagg

Interesting piece of writing there. I like the way you phrase things. -winter

i love your writing. very witty. nice diction as well, and i like your use of meter. it works well in the poem. nice work.