|Reviews for Wishing|
| AWorldAtMyFingertips 4/21/06 . chapter 1
Great one! I like this...if wishing on a star actually worked and I was all cosmic like that I think I'd wish for a Porsche, and like a £million and like 10 pairs of converses all exclusives that no one else would have...oh and of course world peace...Lol...aww, if only...
Anyway wishing is pointless; the time you take wishing for things to happen coul be the time you could take to actually make it happen...;)
Luv this one!
| Keith Andrew 12/17/04 . chapter 1
That was great. Very nicely written. Keep it up-Keith Andrew
| Saeger 12/4/04 . chapter 1
Nice thoughts, and well put. I can relate- to what's being said, and to the people being talked about. Kinda two faced...Good job.
I'll tell Joe. Thanks for supporting him, and his poetry.
| Amethyst Eyed Cynical One 12/4/04 . chapter 1
a very true and well written poem.i loved it!
| Manuel Fajar 12/4/04 . chapter 1
Nothing to be bought,
¿Where’s souls sure strong palliative?
No—thing—can still heart.
Very thoughtful piece—got me to think. Thanks for the inspiration. Published as part of a Renga (chapter 126) of "Haikus, Tankas and Rengas) m