Ooh, I like I like! This poem definitely has good rhyme and rhythm. And I like the subject, but I'm still wondering which "side" this poem leans towards.

Anyway, I enjoyed this one. Keep writing!

I love your contrast in this poem.

This is excellent. It flows very well, your diction is great, the rhyming is natural, and the content really interested me. Judging from this, you seem to have a good sense of what to do with words, heh. Brilliant, I loved this.