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| Divisionred 2008-07-31 ch 3, anon. | abusewhere is the rest of the story |
| Divisionred 2008-07-31 ch 2, anon. | abuseThat was a great continuation of the story. I really hope that they aren't brother and sister. He has kind of told her that he likes someone else is it her? Thanks |
| Divisionred 2008-07-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseI thiught that this is a hreat start. What happens next? I hope that he isn't her father...that wouldn't work. |
| caramel blazers 2007-12-25 ch 3,  | abusegreat story. update soon? |
| Amanda 2007-11-30 ch 1, anon. | abusePlease update! |
| rdrGirl 2007-09-09 ch 3, anon. | abuseI am just coming to this story (09/2007) but was charmed by your characters. The ideas are good. My only criticism is that perhaps the grammar and spelling get in the way sometimes. But, as I said, I've really enjoyed what you've written so far. |
| Val 2007-07-09 ch 3, anon. | abuseThis is a really good story. I hope you update soon! |
| Ana 2007-05-30 ch 3, anon. | abuseThese two are too cute. As much as I want to both of them to be together NOW the story wouldn't be good if you did that. I can't wait to find out about their parents relationship and what happened to them. ^.~ ~Ana~ |
| lushes 2007-05-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really love this story please update soon |
| mrskelley 2007-05-04 ch 3, | abuseI am so glad you updated! I like this story, please update soon! |
| mya2chi 2007-04-30 ch 3, | abuseVery cute young love. Are you going tp move them into the future or tell the parent's story too. |
| JusticeWriter 2007-04-29 ch 3, | abuseAw. Update soon. |
| readergirl1 2007-04-28 ch 3, | abuseYay! An update. Awesome! I love this story. |
| Writing4Eternity 2007-04-28 ch 3, | abuseI like this story even though you has a few grammatical errors. I hope you update SOONER. |
| Phylicia Gordon 2007-04-28 ch 3, | abuseThis is a really good story...please keep writing. I am looking forward to it. The theme is a good choice, too. |