Interesting... I very much like it. Short but...encourages a reader to apply their own thinking.

cute

Vry straight, good

WOW! That was so cool!! You hit that weird-little-feeling-that-I-can't-find-a-name-for-that-involves-love-or-attraction right on the head!

This is really cool. The ending is a bit of a twist, and the repetition works well. Also, the spaced out rhyme isn't forced but just makes it flow. I like it!

I like this one alot too. Its short but it has depth. Sounds almost like the start of a song, (to me anyway) Keep writing...

~Lyndz

Ooh, nice...the last line brings it all together and gives it an unexpected depth. You captured the message in so few words, bravo. Keep writing! ~ PC

I like it, flows in some strange way.I don't know what to say but its very good.

Keep it up.

It's short and to the point, but I like it. It happens a lot in life on both ends...

short, sweet and very cool. Short poetry can be rather tricky to write at times, especially when posing ideas and emotions but this was very well done. A great rhyme scheme and flow really added to the feeling. nice one-Keith Andrew

that was really cool, short but excellent, it was really good. lots of love ~AllyCred~

Interesting concept- kind of like people-watching and making up stories about them, so you feel as if you know them, but they don't know you.

Short and concise...definitely fastpaced==>this stranger doesn't come across as a stalker--you never know though! More is meant by a simple exchange of looks, and peering into ones eyes can open up many things...

Superb :)

Hey, I like this one, its really interesting.

Short but sweet! I like your choice of words... the message is simple but can be taken in so many different ways... the end is sad, like you're missing out on something. Good writing!