 Skylar Lee 2006-03-08 . chapter 7Wow... Just as wonderful as ever. I do hope nothing happens to Asher... like I said before. Nice work! |
 elasandra 2005-12-05 . chapter 7 heyo!Will you ever update this? Lol. Just wondering. And good luck on exams! |
 Cloud Burst 2005-01-29 . chapter 7interesting dream, i wonder who that man was... maybe someone in her old life?
exams r such a bother -.- but now theyre over ^-^ ^-^ |
 Paradoxical Shadows 2005-01-24 . chapter 7Yeah, it was short, but it ended suspenseful. I wonder who the guy was in Aeolyn's dream and who was it that sent the vision to her. =^.^= |
 Laura Barton 2005-01-23 . chapter 7Indeed it was short, but still good. I know what you mean with the whole exams thing *shudders* I don't like `em one bit. Anyway, can't wait to see what happens ^-^ Update when you can |
 Silentwriter9 2005-01-22 . chapter 7mm the shortness is like a teaser =). a voiceless voice... so does he speak into her mind?
can't wait for the update =P
*Silent Writer*
Thank u 4 the review. Yeah, fangs... but u'll understand in Ch.5 (whenever that gets posted lol). Oh! Please don't forget to check the ch.2 note... i changed something!! |
 Cloud Burst 2005-01-17 . chapter 6devastating chapter ='( well worded!!
u introduced a bit of science in this chapter.. its weird cause somehow fantasy doesnt mix with science - im not saying its bad, but its odd, thats all =]
cant wait till next chapter! |
 Paradoxical Shadows 2005-01-16 . chapter 6Aw, poor Asher! I feel like crying now. =( That was a great chapter. Poor, poor Asher...Anyways...XD. I can't wait to read the next chapter! *is hoping that Asher makes it out all right* |
 Silentwriter9 2005-01-15 . chapter 6her aura fed the ebony sickness!! =(
thank you for the email... and for telling me that you updated! for some reason i didnt get an alert... erg to FP lol.
Great job so far... im hooked!
*SW*
I know how you feel about the whole school thing... it sucks lol. update as it comes! |
 Laura Barton 2005-01-15 . chapter 6Nice descriptions ^-^ I really don't know what else to say... Lol, I have no more concrit to give you on this story(so far anyway). So, good job and keep it up. |
 Skylar Lee 2005-01-15 . chapter 6I DONT'T WANT ASHER TO DIE! *cries*
Update ASAP... By the way... I feel your pain with the work/tests/studying thing... |
 Skylar Lee 2005-01-15 . chapter 5I read about Asher... awe... *sniffle* -reads on- |
 elasandra 2005-01-14 . chapter 6 sadness! *sobs* oh no! poor asher. hope he'll be ok. update soon! |
 Paradoxical Shadows 2005-01-10 . chapter 5Aeolyn's back to save the day again! XD! Well, we're starting to learn a little more about the sickness, but it's still kinda mysterious. I wonder where Mikhail went to. Can't wait to read the next chapter! ^^ |
 elasandra 2005-01-08 . chapter 5 Aeolyn is such a brave and nice gal. sad sad chappie, but i like it! update soon! |