Reviews for The Singer of Worlds

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Arion Naomi 2008-10-09 ch 15,	abuseI'm glad it's not a cliff-hanger. I have been waiting for an update for god knows how long. This was a good story, So I thought I'd ask you to continue it, or else I'll start writing fanfiction... I love this story, it's been my favorite on here for years.
NinjAlt 2007-05-23 ch 15,	abuseI'm really enjoying this story. Sadly there have been no updates for awhile. PLEASE I BEG OF YOU. UPDATE. PLEASE! :'(
Rosalinda 2007-04-08 ch 15, anon.	abuseThis story is absoluetly amzing...so may i ask WHERE IS THE REST?! You can't just end like this (though this is not a cliff-hanger thing is funny!)the story is just way too good to end like this!! MORE MORE i want..no demand..MORE!! please, pretty pretty please...
Dragon Fiend Of Doom 2007-03-08 ch 15,	abuseThis is a great story. Harry Potter and J.K.Rowling are writhing in pain on some floor right now. I also like the "This is not a cliff-hanger" warning label. The only bad thing is that it's not finished. Dammit, I want to read it!! When you do finish, contact a publisher and blow J.K.Rowling out of the water. I also like the Cinderella-ish beginning.
Optimistic Cover 2007-01-07 ch 15,	abuseI love this story! Like a previous reviewer said, the first couple of chapters don't seem to sound very natural. It doesn't 'flow' quite right. It's also unfair to compare this to Harry Potter. I think it's a bit annoying how every time somehow writes a story involving magic, someone has to automatically compare it to Harry Potter. Yes, Harry Potter is very well-written, very fascinating, but it's definitely not the standard for fantasy. Your story is very unique, despite the many other stories hanging around out there in the world. I love the characters (especially the eccentric old lady and Infinity) and the classes available at the academy. I wish I can meet two talking statues and get transported to this other world--I would have one hell of a time there. Does this story have any romance by any chance? I'm getting pretty fond of Felix...;) Please update as soon as you can? And when your muse returns? (Lol this reminds me of Danny's muse! Love him!)
j. doe 2005-10-19 ch 15, anon.	abuseplease update this story. it's nothing like harry potter. in fact, it's WAY better.
polofreak1689 2005-10-04 ch 15,	abuseI love this story. I have to admit it's like nothing I've ever read on fictionpress or at all for that matter. The story just keeps getting better and better. Please update soon!
AJ Seawiel 2005-09-12 ch 1,	abuseThis is really good. I shall keep reading, right now Danny is a bit of a Mary Sue but I hope that changes with the chapters. If it doesn't I shall be saying something you could bet on it. ^.~ Keep on writing! OpalEssence ~
RainySunshine 2005-08-15 ch 15, anon.	abuseDude, I don't know how this hasn't gotten more reviews. It's an awesome story. The world you've created is so intricate that it seems real. The characters are wonderful too. I can't wait to see how Danny interacts with Roe's family. Should be very interesting. Update soon!
Jerrac 2005-08-15 ch 15,	abuseI like your story, you going to update soon? Please? :D
Dark Matter Effect 2005-08-10 ch 15,	abuseGreat story, probably one of the best I've read in recent days...somehow I always end up reviewing the stories that haven't been updated in forever. I don't know how. Anyway, nice job. I won't compare it to Harry Potter; it's very unique, especially the part about six...souls, I guess is the word I'm looking for. Does each soul have a different element? I like Danny. Update very soon, please!
Teikan 2005-06-19 ch 15, anon.	abuseI rarely submit reviews of the stories i read on here, but that's mainly because i usually have nothing to say that would be of much use. I'd like to hope this time would be a little different. ;p Anyhow, when i first began reading, something sort popped out at me. The style of writing you used seemed to be very stilted and forced, sort of devoid of a natural sounding 'voice'. It made the first few chapters difficult to read and had a very technical feel, sort of like reading out of a school textbook. The flow became much more fluid and the characters themselves more animated as the chapeters progressed, which made this a truly spectacular read, but the only real suggestion i have would be to maybe go back and take a look at those chapters and try to redo them with the 'voice' you've found over the course of writing this. Like i said, other than that and a few grammer mistakes, it was a surprisingly addictive read. I also feel it's unfair to compare this with Harry Potter. Potter is more polished, but for me atleast, this has a much broader base to work with, and a much less child-oriented feel to it.My 2 cents worth, anyhow, whatever it's worth. =)
Krystal Nickle 2005-06-18 ch 15,	abuseyou know how i said that this could rival harry potter? well, its true. its just that that was the first thing that i thought of as i was reading this story. but i have found another thing that this reminds me more of. you know on miguzi (its a cartoon channel) well, there is this show and it is called the Winx Club. the simularity is that there is this earth girl that comes and she doesnt know her powers or anything but it turns out that she is the last of a long line of royalty and she had this special magic that only that family possessed. anywayz, these are just simialar. but great chapter. but what was up with the foxes? i didnt understand that.
Angelfish 2005-06-15 ch 15,	abuseVery cool!
Crauth 2005-06-13 ch 15,	abuseIf this isn't a cliff-hanger, I don't know what it is! -_- She can summon a fox just by tracing it out? CUTE ^-^ I wanna try summoning a dragon ^-^

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