the "every rose has its thorns" is a cliche, but I enjoyed the rest of the metaphors, especially slipping in the jeans

Ok that WAS good!! I like the concept. my fav line is the 'because the most beautiful thing, can make you bleed" that is SO cool.

First try? Are you sure?! This was really good! *Adds to faves*

I loved this poem. It is so true. My favorite park was 'Because the most beautiful thing, Can make you bleed.'You're a very good poet. Keep writing!

Even the greatest pairs of jeansWill get wornFor some reason, I really loved that line. And I also loved the thing about beautiful things making you bleed... what do you mean you're not a poet? That was amazing! -adds to favs- You rock, Frog Friend!

Powerful and passionate, I love the truth that you speak in this.Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.