 Sallie Beaver 2004-12-08 . chapter 1Wow, it's wonderfully pleasing to read...I feel like I'm falling with all of the enchanting imagery. ^_^
"Swirled blizzards softly playing of fairy tales untold..."
This is my favorite line...I love the feeling of all of the words - it's amazing how you placed them...I could read it over and over again! 'Tis truly a unique work.
PS Thank you for your lovely comments...It means lots to me that you liked it, though I s'pose I could have done better with words. Keep on writing! |
 Akaiyume 2004-12-06 . chapter 1Very beautiful, with a nice serene feeling about it, somewhat like a christmas movie.. :) This is really good. |
 Keith Andrew 2004-12-05 . chapter 1excellent stuff, this is excelently written-Keith Andrew |
 Dark Angels 2004-12-05 . chapter 1That was . . . exquisite! If I could write like that, but then again, if really isn't a word. I will read more of your works, as so they may give me inspiration. Wonderful work! |
 Princess-anna57 2004-12-05 . chapter 1What a beautifully written poem! Absolutely outstanding! :) You have very good vocabulary too! :) So descriptive, this poem is! I love it! -Anna :) |
 Kaylee Sabrina Green 2004-12-05 . chapter 1its good. neat perspective.Please R&R me! Kaylee |