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| Sophilia 2008-02-11 ch 165,  | abuseVery vivid in description but still has an abstract and surreal feeling to it. Great job... -sophilia |
| simpleplan13 2008-02-05 ch 165, | abusebeautiful descriptions |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-12 ch 163, | abuseIts very sweet and uplifting for something about death, which I like.. nice job |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-04 ch 162, | abuseI love the question at the end |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-29 ch 161, | abuseok i had to go look up that word, but after that I liked it a lot.. lol |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-12 ch 158, | abusedepressing but great questions |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-11 ch 159, | abuseI love the whole way you described basically a wandering eye.. lol |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-09 ch 160, | abusemore running... love the last line |
| simpleplan13 2007-08-22 ch 150, | abuseI like that first stanza |
| simpleplan13 2007-08-22 ch 148, | abuseAw.. nice imagery |
| simpleplan13 2007-08-22 ch 149, | abuseANOTHER VERY SWEET POEM.. sorry about the caps |
| simpleplan13 2007-08-04 ch 147, | abusebeautiful personification |
| simpleplan13 2007-08-01 ch 146, | abuseI like this... especially that first stanza.. well done |
| simpleplan13 2007-05-24 ch 145, | abusevery very true... i love the title |
| simpleplan13 2007-05-24 ch 144, | abuseinteresting... i really like the last line |