I like the title. The alliteration was nice. I also like how you incorporated the lyrics. However, since so much of the piece is lyrics, it felt way too short. Maybe you could add another stanza?

"& Knows that all the men in her life will never stay."... capitalizing the K felt awkward here

Also, your apostrophes look odd. I do like the piece thought. It makes a really good point.

I love the title, it's funny and true about most people. I also like the word choice a lot. Especially in the beginning of the last stanza.

Really nice. I like your word choices a lot. The last line is especially great.

Breathtaking, as usual. This one is my favorite. I think you did a marvekous job adressing the questions and fears that most people have to confront at some point in their lives.

~Amanda

Really good poem. I like the metaphor of the Sphinx with the riddle to your life. If you don't get it right, you'll die, right?

I promise I'll review more later.

-Stardust.

This really captures the mood of a starch white doctor's office with out of date magazine's on the table for you to read while you wait. I definitely know how that feels.

-Stardust.

As I'm not a Spanish-speaker, I decided to use a couple of translators. I think I lost something in translation, but it still seemed quite beautiful to me. Short and simple.

-Stardust.

This poem was really emotional. Is it actually based on personal experience, or is this something you thought of one day and had to write? Either way, it's really well-felt.

-Stardust.

The various images that you give in the poem are stunning. I love how you juxtaposed the beauty of nature versus the precision of science and mathematics; it's poems like these that are meeting the twenty-first century, proving poetry is not dead.

-Stardust.

I love how your style sometimes resembles that of a mixture between Allen Ginsberg and William Shakespeare's. When I read the last stanza espcially I was getting a real sonnet vibe. Also, I like the third stanza. The dropped vowels made me read it more carefully.

-Stardust.

This one made me laugh, for some reason. I want to quote it to some girls... and guys at my school. Well done.

-Stardust.

This poem is aptly named. It's quite cynical, and yet there's a lot of truth in it. THis line especially mirrored a lot of what I'm thinking lately:

'Soldier versus terrorist,
Difference’s how you kill.'

Just so revealing and thought-provoking.

-Stardust.

Okay, I'm going to take the plunge. This preface has convinced me to do so. Your style is really excellent- it draws pictures in my head.

-Stardust.

I like the rhyme scheme, it was interesting and nicely done.