All of your work is amazing, this included. good stuff.

this story just made me go "wow"...favorite line: " I can make this person look better in death then he ever did in life."...really made me think

Interesting.. I'd like to see where it's leading. I sort of have a story like this one. If you want to check it out, go to my page and read "Torture In The Kitchen" But yeah, this one has somewhere to go I think, it's agood little prologue.