 Irresistible Apple 2008-12-01 . chapter 6This one reminds me of...myself, quite frankly. I loved how you call her eyes "Diadems of blue, turquoise as the summer sky" |
 simpleplan13 2007-01-30 . chapter 200I LOVE that first line.. wonderful job |
 simpleplan13 2007-01-29 . chapter 199I like the repition a lot |
 simpleplan13 2007-01-29 . chapter 198interesting idea "To only value that which struggle brings".. i like it.. awesome job |
 simpleplan13 2007-01-23 . chapter 197I like this.. its sweet and I honestly agree with most of it... great job |
 simpleplan13 2007-01-17 . chapter 196I love chocolate... lol.. nice job |
 Emmytastic gal 2006-12-09 . chapter 3I LOVE THIS! So creative and whimsical. Tje upside down question mark is super cool. Great use of dashes.
Keep it up. write on.
-Em |
 Chocolate Marshmallow Boi 2006-12-08 . chapter 23WOW! You make ordinary things out of this world... especially for the term known as love... You make it so extraordinary... i love it... (Plus the surplus amount of poetry in here. hehehe) |
 Nobody-n-Particular 2006-12-07 . chapter 199Very sincere and kind. I like the repetition. |
 simpleplan13 2006-10-04 . chapter 195very bittersweet... great piece |
 Princess-anna57 2006-09-09 . chapter 178Complete brilliance. Seriously. It's so powerful! Keep writing!
~Anna~ ^_^ |
 simpleplan13 2006-04-07 . chapter 194sadly very true.. great piece |
 simpleplan13 2006-03-30 . chapter 193great questions |
 simpleplan13 2006-03-22 . chapter 191very true especially those last two stanzas.. nice poem |
 myno 2006-02-06 . chapter 191 beautiful poem, so full of tenderness. |