This one reminds me of...myself, quite frankly. I loved how you call her eyes "Diadems of blue, turquoise as the summer sky"

I LOVE that first line.. wonderful job

I like the repition a lot

interesting idea "To only value that which struggle brings".. i like it.. awesome job

I like this.. its sweet and I honestly agree with most of it... great job

I love chocolate... lol.. nice job

I LOVE THIS! So creative and whimsical. Tje upside down question mark is super cool. Great use of dashes.

Keep it up. write on.

-Em

WOW! You make ordinary things out of this world... especially for the term known as love... You make it so extraordinary... i love it... (Plus the surplus amount of poetry in here. hehehe)

Very sincere and kind. I like the repetition.

very bittersweet... great piece

Complete brilliance. Seriously. It's so powerful! Keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^

sadly very true.. great piece

great questions

very true especially those last two stanzas.. nice poem

beautiful poem, so full of tenderness.