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| simpleplan13 2007-01-30 ch 200,  | abuseI LOVE that first line.. wonderful job |
| simpleplan13 2007-01-29 ch 199, | abuseI like the repition a lot |
| simpleplan13 2007-01-29 ch 198, | abuseinteresting idea "To only value that which struggle brings".. i like it.. awesome job |
| simpleplan13 2007-01-23 ch 197, | abuseI like this.. its sweet and I honestly agree with most of it... great job |
| simpleplan13 2007-01-17 ch 196, | abuseI love chocolate... lol.. nice job |
| Emmytastic gal 2006-12-09 ch 3, | abuseI LOVE THIS! So creative and whimsical. Tje upside down question mark is super cool. Great use of dashes. Keep it up. write on. -Em |
| Chocolate Marshmallow Boi 2006-12-08 ch 23, | abuseWOW! You make ordinary things out of this world... especially for the term known as love... You make it so extraordinary... i love it... (Plus the surplus amount of poetry in here. hehehe) |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-12-07 ch 199, | abuseVery sincere and kind. I like the repetition. |
| simpleplan13 2006-10-04 ch 195, | abusevery bittersweet... great piece |
| Princess-anna57 2006-09-09 ch 178, | abuseComplete brilliance. Seriously. It's so powerful! Keep writing! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| simpleplan13 2006-04-07 ch 194, | abusesadly very true.. great piece |
| simpleplan13 2006-03-30 ch 193, | abusegreat questions |
| simpleplan13 2006-03-22 ch 191, | abusevery true especially those last two stanzas.. nice poem |
| myno 2006-02-06 ch 191, anon. | abusebeautiful poem, so full of tenderness. |
| simpleplan13 2006-02-05 ch 190, | abusevery nice |