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Complications
2005-11-22
ch 1,
abusewell said, vague but pure. True for many I'm sure. your rhym is good too.
crispybea
2005-09-30
ch 1,
abusea good poem. your really good in expresing the real truth behind siv. a great talent.
Gir Garcia
2005-01-21
ch 1,
abusethat was very beautiful. wow...deep, but beautiful.
BlackFlights
2004-12-06
ch 1,
abusea very good poem. I loved the line 'how I survived I don't know'

It's a poem many people can relate (pls check out some of mine and you'll see what i mean) the flow of the poem drops a bit after 'i'm still giving today' but overall well done.
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