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| Complications 2005-11-22 ch 1, | abusewell said, vague but pure. True for many I'm sure. your rhym is good too. |
| crispybea 2005-09-30 ch 1, | abusea good poem. your really good in expresing the real truth behind siv. a great talent. |
| Gir Garcia 2005-01-21 ch 1, | abusethat was very beautiful. wow...deep, but beautiful. |
| BlackFlights 2004-12-06 ch 1, | abusea very good poem. I loved the line 'how I survived I don't know' It's a poem many people can relate (pls check out some of mine and you'll see what i mean) the flow of the poem drops a bit after 'i'm still giving today' but overall well done. |