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| kosovka 2005-02-15 ch 1, | abuseOh my god, this story was really sad at the end. I loved it though. It had a fiew unexpected twists to it though. I didn't expect them, but sometimes they are good in stories like this. I suggest that if you want, that you can turn this into a long story. It would be really good. Either way it is really nice. |
| Augustemerald813 2004-12-07 ch 1, | abuseWow-this story is really good also! I like it better than your other one, but both of them are great! :-) It's really innovative and has a great plot. I would suggest making this a longer story if you were up for the challenge! |