Bravo, that was very nice. I like the way in which you describe the girl at the start of each stanza. This is one of those poems where it's very apparant that the writer put a lot of thought and feeling into the work. Very nice :)

Oh blah this is so amazing, I am trying hard not to envy your talent. *envies, envies* *sobs* Yet again beautiful, jeez...

Love,

Anna

I think I have fallen in love with you or is it your words, your words are seducing and some of the most beautiful I have ever read, your very good please never stop. There are few poems that could compare to yours and your female audience loves you more than likely. Keep going, I loved it.

Hey this was cool, quite a picture you've painted there, and very captivating throughout the whole poem. Exceptional work,-Rae

shocked beyond belief at this point, but anyway. i have to say i loved it, it was excellent and i especially loved the flow. many would precieve it as a slap in the face, but i think the true meaning is deeper and a joke in away, among 2 friends. really enjoyed it.lots of love ~AllyCred~

I think it's only right that I review this since I'm the subject. My god, this is very good. I must say I was expecting something more...angry (rhymes of "**" and "ditch" came to mind...just kidding!) but this was very good. It's one of the best (and only) poems written about me, and I'm one hell of a screwed up subject. Very nice job.