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| HelloLovely 2008-07-04 ch 1,  | abuseWait...I want to know more! Haha. Love, Becca |
| centenarian 2008-06-05 ch 1, | abuseIt was cute and quirky. Just think about all the "holidays". And if you try really hard, there are A LOT of "holidays" around. But I think the real question is...did they end up together? I mean, she obviously loves him, and well, he likes her enough to want to keep on sending her cards right? So i mean, why'd they break it off in the first place? WHY AREN"T THEY TOGETHER? That question's going to haunt me, there better be an answer. |
| Evolet Blue 2008-05-18 ch 1, | abuseIt's kind of great, simple but still you can see she loves him, even though she claims she doesn't. |
| jekodama 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abuseHahahaha, AWESOME! It's like a shrink appointment, isn't it? anyway, very funny. |
| qwart 2008-01-09 ch 1, | abuseI love that last line, "But it has nothing to do with the cards, does it?" This story is so short yet so good! |
| apple cherry muffins 2007-12-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved it. It was very inderesting & Creative. |
| newfoundhope 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abuseNice. I especially loved the last line. :] |
| xxSakura Kissxx 2007-10-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseOkies I know I'd reviewed this before but I really really think that'd this be a perfect beggining for a story, and that you should continue with this, I can see this developing into some big plot, and maybe you'd be able to give us some background information ^^; I onno :] o well hehe :P I still loved this >:] I printed it out and showed it to some of my friends and most of them said it was really good lOl |
| Dream that was Life 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abuseThat was... very strange, but good, in it's own, weird little way. The end was a bit like, huh? and the person in italics... *ping* It's on my favourites for its weirdness and simple mindboggliness (is that even a word?). R. |
| Melika Elena 2007-08-24 ch 1, | abuseThis is a really cute, original concept. I loved the quirkiness of it! |
| tearitrightup 2007-08-08 ch 1, | abusei dunno. your stories, ambiguity and poison, are so WEIRD. but they're not bad. they're actually really good and well-written. but it's so unusual. i dunno how to explain it. but ya. you're still one of my favorite authors. |
| Essie 2007-04-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is absolutely brilliant!! I loved it. It's subtle yet you can't help but work your imagination. I'm a very suspicious paranoid person so from the beginning it was like - what's that bastard's motive?!! heheheheh Also can't help but want more. I think you ended it at the right moment too and left everyone wanting more. Is there a sequel? hahahah one shot sequel. =P I feel so content. |
| Arlywn 2007-03-24 ch 1, | abuseI think it was a bit too short. You just ended it. |
| la mocha 2007-03-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseLoved it, especially the implications of the ending. |
| Hyperroll 2007-03-20 ch 1, | abusehmm, well, the entire story is great, but i think what really made it go "above and beyond" was the end. "But it has nothing to do with the cards, does it?" Love it, love it, love it. nice work |