 thepiemaster 2009-10-04 . chapter 1That was so entertaining to read. I don't quite get the ending. I'll reflect on it later. Props for making me laugh :D |
 CatProduttore 2009-06-16 . chapter 1I really really liked it. I want to know more about the characters! |
 Menshi 2009-06-12 . chapter 1Uhh... I didn't understand the ending |
 chocolate_and_bananas 2009-05-22 . chapter 1 i found this story really amusing ;D
think about all the holidays.
i love the originality of this story. torturing someone with greeting cards? i love the idea of it! maybe i should try it with someone some time ..
haha.
anyway, thanks for sharing your story. keep up the good work :) |
 soaps'nsuds 2009-03-30 . chapter 1LOLZ. i found it funny. this might actually be a nice start or middle or end of a story or mini story or whatever. you can still keep this for reference though. make a story that is in third person so you can keep this so that the readers would have a peek into the character's POV. |
 KelleBelle 2009-03-18 . chapter 1Definitely random, but I like it!
Does he even send cards on Father's Day? :D
Haha, um... yeah.
Congrats for winning the SKoW thing, by the way. :) |
 Hope.flies 2009-03-01 . chapter 1Thats so creative and amazing! I love the originality of it all, I mean it's not every day (or ever, really), that you read about a man torturing his ex girlfriend (assuming it's ex)with hallmark cards.
The character was wonderfully portrayed, and it seems so well developed that you've borrowed her from something else...
I love how the ending really makes you wonder what he did before the cards to make her never forget him...first love? did she lose it to him? What?
However, I think that was part of the story, so I don't want answers. Plus, I love how open ended it is. It lets you wonder and do something hardly ever done these days: think. Wonderful job writing! I love how creative and amazing and gifted you seem to be! |
 rainbowpuddle 2008-12-21 . chapter 1WHOA, that last line blew me away!
It was a great ending line. It was also a good cliff hanger. (sigh) I wish there was more, and I wonder why they broke up . .
Great job on the story. You are an amazing writer. |
 HelloLovely 2008-07-04 . chapter 1Wait...I want to know more! Haha.
Love,
Becca |
 centenarian 2008-06-05 . chapter 1It was cute and quirky. Just think about all the "holidays". And if you try really hard, there are A LOT of "holidays" around. But I think the real question is...did they end up together? I mean, she obviously loves him, and well, he likes her enough to want to keep on sending her cards right? So i mean, why'd they break it off in the first place? WHY AREN"T THEY TOGETHER? That question's going to haunt me, there better be an answer. |
 annawilliam 2008-05-18 . chapter 1It's kind of great, simple but still you can see she loves him, even though she claims she doesn't. |
 jekodama 2008-03-20 . chapter 1Hahahaha, AWESOME! It's like a shrink appointment, isn't it? anyway, very funny. |
 qwart 2008-01-09 . chapter 1I love that last line, "But it has nothing to do with the cards, does it?"
This story is so short yet so good! |
 apple cherry muffins 2007-12-21 . chapter 1 I loved it.
It was very inderesting & Creative. |
 newfoundhope 2007-12-08 . chapter 1Nice. I especially loved the last line. :] |