good ending

I;d say 'nice' but it's not a very pleasant poem. It's very, very well written, well done. :D

hey!! wow this is the cutest most evil poem.. its so lyk i duno.. it really fits wit me.. i understand it.. ALOT! u have such a wonderfully innocent way of displayin the most disturbed and adult feelings of life. i really really liked this!!a nd im definetly checkin out more of ur stuff! keep up d amazing work!! love and admiration Gretchen45 x plz read and review my story 'Quartz sight' its pretty different with a gud few evil thoughts.. id love ur opinion!! tanx xx

woa... I write alot about suicide but I wont put my work up here cuz its very graphic and my sister would see it and she would yell at me...again.. anywhoo this is a snazzy poem!

Hey!

LOVE THIS! So true. I wrote one on suicide, too. And a lot of others. Especially ones about being alone. And lost in the dark. Lost in yourself. But this is so true. So real. I really think you did an incredible job. Keep writing!

Luv ya,Tashi :)