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| Saeger 2004-12-06 ch 1,  | abuseOh... ::blushes:: Whoops. I should really check all my e-mail before i say stuff like that. ^^;ANYway, this is- in my opinion- a little bit better. It seemed to flow a little more, and... well, it seemed more in depth or emotionful(probably not a real word, but hey...)Good job, again! |