It's really good so far. I'm pretty sure David's a vampire and Sean is gay. But I'm not totally sure. Please continue.

Interesting. Can't get a clear picture of the possible endings yet, but that's good 'cuz i hate a story i can figure out the ending to by reading the first few chapters :). This "attention" business certainly seems like it will be important later though. UPDATE SOON PLEASE !! :)

interesting...i have no idea what so ever about where this sean guy fits in...keep up the good work :)

This is a great start! Pls write more soon

hmm, this seems interesting. i hope you continue. i wanna see how this develops!! :-)

A good Idea. Definitely keep going. There aren't many stories about artists on this site (well, not that i've found anyway) but this is pretty good. I would definitely play up the tension between the two, with Dan making more "impossible" demands to bring out Amanda's capabilities. Update soon!