 Princess-anna57 2009-01-29 . chapter 87I love how your poetry is so philosophical and presents great and thought provoking concepts. Write on!
~Anna~ ^_^ |
 simpleplan13 2008-11-01 . chapter 84I really like the last two lines of the second stanza, they are so true. I also like the italicizing of love. It works really nicely. |
 recycle rhymes 2008-10-26 . chapter 85i really liked the last stanza. it had such a freedom to it. beautiful work. |
 SEMMU 2008-10-26 . chapter 2Very nice piece. You've found a cool idea that is written about from time-to-time; although, I disagree with your sentiments. I find the universal truths of religion to reflect, more often, the darkest and most hopeless conditions of humanity as opposed to hope and "peace on earth". Frankly, with the exception of Confusian ideology, the religious leaders of the various movements you've mentioned are cloaked in blood, spilled in the pursuit of power. I find no God in religion.
Anyways, my personal opinion doesn't take away from the effectiveness of your work. If your goal was to provoke thought and reflection than, with me anyway, you've done a wonderful job. Write on! |
 Chidori Nadare 2008-03-08 . chapter 83I find this what somehow abstract or even surreal in its imagery. I like the rhyming on the second part, very effective. Great job...
-C.N |
 simpleplan13 2008-02-08 . chapter 83I relaly love the rhyming |
 THROUGHTHESEEYES 2008-02-06 . chapter 83The last two lines insight. Loved the progression from the sun to the soul. |
 simpleplan13 2006-11-06 . chapter 81I like this... interesting and well done |
 simpleplan13 2006-09-17 . chapter 80powerful adn beautiful |
 simpleplan13 2006-09-11 . chapter 79beautiful |
 diffident 2006-08-17 . chapter 80Not exactly poetry to be taken lightly, but strangely emanating nonetheless.
marie |
 Nobody-n-Particular 2006-08-17 . chapter 80Lovely. |
 Sakru angelqueen 2006-08-17 . chapter 79Nice and spirtual! |
 Nobody-n-Particular 2006-08-16 . chapter 79Lovely diction. |
 Princess-anna57 2006-08-14 . chapter 79Amazing poem. I really, really like it! Well done, and keep writing!
~Anna~ ^_^ |