FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Chidori Nadare 2008-03-08 ch 83,  | abuseI find this what somehow abstract or even surreal in its imagery. I like the rhyming on the second part, very effective. Great job... -C.N |
| simpleplan13 2008-02-08 ch 83, | abuseI relaly love the rhyming |
| THROUGHTHESEEYES 2008-02-06 ch 83, | abuseThe last two lines insight. Loved the progression from the sun to the soul. |
| simpleplan13 2006-11-06 ch 81, | abuseI like this... interesting and well done |
| simpleplan13 2006-09-17 ch 80, | abusepowerful adn beautiful |
| simpleplan13 2006-09-11 ch 79, | abusebeautiful |
| diffident 2006-08-17 ch 80, | abuseNot exactly poetry to be taken lightly, but strangely emanating nonetheless. marie |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-08-17 ch 80, | abuseLovely. |
| Sakru angelqueen 2006-08-17 ch 79, | abuseNice and spirtual! |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-08-16 ch 79, | abuseLovely diction. |
| Princess-anna57 2006-08-14 ch 79, | abuseAmazing poem. I really, really like it! Well done, and keep writing! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| simpleplan13 2006-05-28 ch 78, | abuseI really love this.. especially that first stanza awesome job |
| simpleplan13 2006-05-02 ch 77, | abuseI like this a lot.. beautifully written |
| simpleplan13 2006-04-23 ch 76, | abuseI really like that first stanza... very cute |
| simpleplan13 2006-04-23 ch 75, | abusei love that last stanza |