*BELCH* Ah...Pay it Forward? I remember that movie...good movie...GOOD movie...yeah...ha-ha...I need a new hobby...lol, Well...yeah...Thad loves you! ^_^ ~Gaki Toki

I liked this one a lot. Simple, heartfelt and endearing.

The last line does not flow very well. Maybe try, Another fear of what might never happen? Just a thought.

Take care, D.

I can totally relate to this poem. I know exactly what you are talking about. But don't worry, things will work out and you'll find that guy. And thanks for the review. And yes, I am updating, this story has a specific direction it is going in and that was simple the prelude.

Aw, that's sad.:( I'm sure a lot of people feel like this. *sigh* Love is so rare now.Anyways, great poem. I heard it as a song with like a light piano and whispers and an echo.

Interesting format. Relax—it will come your way when you don't expect it. m

Very dark and brooding. You give alot of emotion in this poem, it is good.