wow..love it..a simple well meaning story that so straight to the point. First kinda feeling sucks for Eli, but in the end, you really did good job of doing a happy ending..LOVE IT!!

I want more! please?

O.oSEQUEL! Please! I *need* a sequel to this! It was just soo sweet! I completelly loved it!Or you could make an epilogue or something of the sorts:PWhere there would be the wedding, the family after the wedding, and well.. all that sweet and fluffy stuff everyone likes:D

But I gotta go now, seeya!Hugs:*yuranda

Oh man I loved your story. I so want more that was adorably cute. I hope you will right more

Yea I want more! heh I like the flower boy comment :-)

Gah, *Chokes on sweetness of it all* That was so ** cute. Its a good ending, but I definitely would like you to continue. Your choice, of course.

aw hahah that was the cutest thing i have ever read!! lol i wouldn't mind if you continued it, but i loved! lol Damien is so adorable too, i kinda wanna know how he turns out lol anyways!! great job!!

great premise. I am totally intriuged please write more soon

My thoughts? I love this! You've touched on one of my absolute favorite things-- cowboys. -grins- Very hot.

ah i want the ending please! lol does he tell her? does he get the kid? lol i wanna know!! ^^ please please please update soon!! and please continue! i'm dying over here lol anyways cool chapter!

ITs great... Ofcrouse I want more!! more, more and more more