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Reviews For: The Secret Trip
nomy 2008-11-12 . chapter 2
wow..love it..a simple well meaning story that so straight to the point. First kinda feeling sucks for Eli, but in the end, you really did good job of doing a happy ending..LOVE IT!!
darcy101 2005-08-04 . chapter 2
I want more! please?
yuranda 2004-12-20 . chapter 2
O.oSEQUEL! Please! I *need* a sequel to this! It was just soo sweet! I completelly loved it!Or you could make an epilogue or something of the sorts:PWhere there would be the wedding, the family after the wedding, and well.. all that sweet and fluffy stuff everyone likes:D

But I gotta go now, seeya!Hugs:*yuranda
phsycoloverbunnykiller 2004-12-18 . chapter 2
Oh man I loved your story. I so want more that was adorably cute. I hope you will right more
Kazza2085 2004-12-17 . chapter 2
Yea I want more! heh I like the flower boy comment :-)
SatisfyAnEmptyInside 2004-12-17 . chapter 2
Gah, *Chokes on sweetness of it all* That was so ** cute. Its a good ending, but I definitely would like you to continue. Your choice, of course.
Staris 2004-12-16 . chapter 2
aw hahah that was the cutest thing i have ever read!! lol i wouldn't mind if you continued it, but i loved! lol Damien is so adorable too, i kinda wanna know how he turns out lol anyways!! great job!!
bambi4real 2004-12-08 . chapter 1
great premise. I am totally intriuged please write more soon
writtenbyrandom 2004-12-07 . chapter 1
My thoughts? I love this! You've touched on one of my absolute favorite things-- cowboys. -grins- Very hot.
Staris 2004-12-06 . chapter 1
ah i want the ending please! lol does he tell her? does he get the kid? lol i wanna know!! ^^ please please please update soon!! and please continue! i'm dying over here lol anyways cool chapter!
Kazza2085 2004-12-06 . chapter 1
ITs great... Ofcrouse I want more!! more, more and more more
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