wow...just like wow...

okay yeah, my reviews are usually pretty much one liners, but when I like something I usually dont know what to say.

(I grabbed your name off of the LJ community and thought I'd come have a peek) Anyhoo, I really enjoy this. The format reads well, and works well with your poem, I enjoy the topic (heh, I love things that play with the ideas of humans, their nature and whatnot) The flow works well, each stanza falling into the next. Rhythm is good. The last three lines of the first stanza, though, have the feel of picking for the sake for rhyming. But overall, this is lovely.

Genius! i love it especially 'The world is now a broken toy' and other such lines, but its amazing as a whole. wish i could write like this.

~*Shadow Rayn

hm. this is thought provoking. geez ur writing style is so different now. thats not supposed to negative...im actually impressed. tho i have to say im not a fan of poems that rhyme.

jac