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Reviews For: Despair of Auscultation
Akio 2004-12-17 . chapter 1
aww.. That's sad and depressing. ^^ I like it though!
Manuel Fajar 2004-12-08 . chapter 1
Pounding rhythms hard,

Fading inaudible soft,—

¿Where'd her heartbeat go?

¿Why does she despair—live so?

¿How will she purge hate—let go?

—M—
Kat-chan 2004-12-08 . chapter 1
O_O Woah...dark and depressing...ILIKE IT!
Dana 2004-12-07 . chapter 1
Gave me chills!
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