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Sakura5584 2007-01-25 ch 3,	controversy! i love it!
xgummihattx 2005-04-10 ch 3,	o you have to update!
Britney 2005-03-26 ch 3,	lol, I know a trent whos a major dick and this made me think of him. Anyway. It's good. I like it so far.
Shorty Baby 2005-03-19 ch 3,	Didn't see that one coming. Damn... I better see another chapter soon! I like this story, it's believable!
DuchessYappingDog 2005-03-16 ch 3,	Ah. What bad luck, or maybe it's good luck? Sigh, that sucks. The cousin of the cheating ex. Sigh.
es 2005-03-15 ch 3,	great story. i actually didnt c that coming but its a good twist
pawprintsaly000 2005-03-15 ch 3,	Yeah, I predicted that ending...but it never really gets old! Can't wait until the next chapter!
Jenn 2005-03-15 ch 3,	Great story so far keep up the good work just dont take forever for the second chapter.
DuchessYappingDog 2005-02-13 ch 2,	Aghh!! I can't wait to see what happens next. Aw boo to exboyfriend, Trent. Actually, the name Trent reminds me of Daria (the cartoon, haha). I wonder if Trent and Daria ever got together. I never got to watch it since it was on really late at night... and then it got cancelled. =[
xgummihattx 2005-02-06 ch 2,	definately continue with this story. it has so much potential and it's developing rather nicely, not to fast and not to slow. keep up the good work and update soon!
silent soulcry 2005-02-02 ch 2,	So here is the deal: I love you and I love this too. I wish you would write more, because you are so good. I love your choice of people... the characters are so real (mostly since I know the real people behind them), but it just comes alive. You could try and add more characters if you like, just dont make it too overbearing with too many people. If you want, you could add a character like me and give her a guy. And they can have hot steamy sex. But he has to have his tongue pierced. His name could be Dave... lol. But he cant be an ass. Anyways, I really like how this is comnig along. You should definately add more. I love you! (and I want to do you!)Bri~
ally 2005-02-01 ch 2,	whats all I have to say is. make mike and al as is allison do it. hahathe only thing I cant hink of is mike in those white thin see throughish bike shorts or wahtever they were at walmart
pawprintsaly000 2005-02-01 ch 2,	I definitely still love this story! I think this chapter was just as good as the last, if not better! You are doing a good job at developing Alex, and starting to work on Mike...even though he sounds totally perfect! It is a very cute story and I think you are on the right track, so I definitely think you should continue it. I will be waiting for more!
Shaz (fivedollarshake) 2005-02-01 ch 2,	I'm back! I had completely forgotten this story; until I saw it listed in the section as updated..I thought...oh something new...then I realized I'd read the first chappie! lol. Anyways, this was a fun chapter. Mike sounds delicious, and in answer to your authors note; I think Alex's development is coming along nicely. We now know a bit more as to why she could be slightly insecure about relationships, but I think Mike could change that. I hope this helps...describig characters suck...
NoMoreTears 2005-01-30 ch 1,	Tres cool. I could give you a detailed analysis of every chapter and your characters (LOL, a geek and proud. Does it get any better?) but I will spare you for now. However, if you don't update, I will be very, very tempted. (If you're anything like me you'll love hearing analysis about your work so that proceeds to the above being not useful. Ah well.) Update... or I will light a fortknife and chase you. Laala

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