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| stranger with your doorkey 2006-09-29 ch 2,  | abusei'm hooked.update soon. |
| JustLikeMe91 2005-04-16 ch 2, | abuseI really like it! Please continue writing it, along with your other story...forgot the title. |
| psychotically obsessed 2004-12-06 ch 2, | abusewow, this is certainly interesting. Having a friendship over the internet, but not in real life. Lol. I've had lots of friendships with people over the net, and half the time its easier for us to talk on the net rather than in person, so i can relate to your main character. Its a good story, keep writing. |
| Neon Tetra 2004-12-06 ch 2, | abuseI like your basic premise; it's unlike anything I can remember reading, and presents an interesting dilemma. On the other hand, the language seems kind of stilted, the use of slang inconsistant. Also, the note about interracial relationships in the summary was a little jarring; as the product of three generations of interracial couples (more than that, if you consider the history of Mexico), I can tell you that the issue race in love isn't nearly as controvercial as it used to be.Keep trying! |