 Faithless Juliet 2009-07-04 . chapter 169She seems to think my hands are toys to scratch,
And that my back and chest are but tree trunks
To sink her claws in while climbing upwards
To perch upon a shoulder to look out.
- Very lush and delightful imagry. Keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet. |
 Faithless Juliet 2009-07-04 . chapter 168I liked how you played the the idea of cold weather/wintery themes througout. It gave the reader a really strong sense of time, and it also acted very well as forsadowing the darker emotions you were expressing.
Much love,
Juliet. |
 Princess-anna57 2009-06-13 . chapter 169This is super pretty and just great. There's definately growth in your writing, so keep it up! :)
~Anna~ ^_^ |
 simpleplan13 2008-06-04 . chapter 168I like the last stanza, especially. |
 simpleplan13 2008-06-03 . chapter 166this is sweet. I like it... nice job. |
 simpleplan13 2008-04-15 . chapter 165I really like the first stanza. The rest is nice too, but I especially like that part. |
 Princess-anna57 2008-03-13 . chapter 163Oh wow this is really cool. I like it a lot, especially the first stanza. Write on!
~Anna~ ^_^ |
 simpleplan13 2008-02-29 . chapter 164I like this.. .it's really a sweet little story |
 simpleplan13 2008-02-10 . chapter 163really interesting... it made me think... nicely done |
 simpleplan13 2007-12-24 . chapter 162I like the interesting math thing in the beginning |
 simpleplan13 2007-12-11 . chapter 161very sweet.. I like it... i like the rhyming |
 simpleplan13 2007-08-22 . chapter 144very true and well done |
 simpleplan13 2007-08-22 . chapter 143aw... very sweet |
 simpleplan13 2007-08-04 . chapter 141aw that was so sad and so sweet... beautiful piece... ::hug:: |
 simpleplan13 2007-08-04 . chapter 140I like the whole eye thing... great job |