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| simpleplan13 2008-04-15 ch 165,  | abuseI really like the first stanza. The rest is nice too, but I especially like that part. |
| Princess-anna57 2008-03-13 ch 163, | abuseOh wow this is really cool. I like it a lot, especially the first stanza. Write on! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| simpleplan13 2008-02-29 ch 164, | abuseI like this.. .it's really a sweet little story |
| simpleplan13 2008-02-10 ch 163, | abusereally interesting... it made me think... nicely done |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-24 ch 162, | abuseI like the interesting math thing in the beginning |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-11 ch 161, | abusevery sweet.. I like it... i like the rhyming |
| simpleplan13 2007-08-22 ch 144, | abusevery true and well done |
| simpleplan13 2007-08-22 ch 143, | abuseaw... very sweet |
| simpleplan13 2007-08-04 ch 141, | abuseaw that was so sad and so sweet... beautiful piece... ::hug:: |
| simpleplan13 2007-08-04 ch 140, | abuseI like the whole eye thing... great job |
| simpleplan13 2007-05-25 ch 138, | abuseinteresting.. nice message.. i liek it |
| simpleplan13 2007-05-24 ch 137, | abuseI really like the last two lines of the second to last stanza... and the first line |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2007-05-16 ch 144, | abuseDefinitely, I agree muchly with the last two lines. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2007-05-16 ch 146, | abuseDo we have control of our destinies? What makes a person more happy in life - an external or internal locus of control. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2007-05-15 ch 148, | abuseI love the financial focus of diction regarding the woman in Sicily, and then the sincerity of the rest regarding the man's emotions. I like how you take a situation, and extract universal questions/themes from it. |