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simpleplan13
2008-04-15
ch 165,
abuseI really like the first stanza. The rest is nice too, but I especially like that part.
Princess-anna57
2008-03-13
ch 163,
abuseOh wow this is really cool. I like it a lot, especially the first stanza. Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^
simpleplan13
2008-02-29
ch 164,
abuseI like this.. .it's really a sweet little story
simpleplan13
2008-02-10
ch 163,
abusereally interesting... it made me think... nicely done
simpleplan13
2007-12-24
ch 162,
abuseI like the interesting math thing in the beginning
simpleplan13
2007-12-11
ch 161,
abusevery sweet.. I like it... i like the rhyming
simpleplan13
2007-08-22
ch 144,
abusevery true and well done
simpleplan13
2007-08-22
ch 143,
abuseaw... very sweet
simpleplan13
2007-08-04
ch 141,
abuseaw that was so sad and so sweet... beautiful piece... ::hug::
simpleplan13
2007-08-04
ch 140,
abuseI like the whole eye thing... great job
simpleplan13
2007-05-25
ch 138,
abuseinteresting.. nice message.. i liek it
simpleplan13
2007-05-24
ch 137,
abuseI really like the last two lines of the second to last stanza... and the first line
Nobody-n-Particular
2007-05-16
ch 144,
abuseDefinitely, I agree muchly with the last two lines.
Nobody-n-Particular
2007-05-16
ch 146,
abuseDo we have control of our destinies? What makes a person more happy in life - an external or internal locus of control.
Nobody-n-Particular
2007-05-15
ch 148,
abuseI love the financial focus of diction regarding the woman in Sicily, and then the sincerity of the rest regarding the man's emotions. I like how you take a situation, and extract universal questions/themes from it.
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