She seems to think my hands are toys to scratch,
And that my back and chest are but tree trunks
To sink her claws in while climbing upwards
To perch upon a shoulder to look out.

- Very lush and delightful imagry. Keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.

I liked how you played the the idea of cold weather/wintery themes througout. It gave the reader a really strong sense of time, and it also acted very well as forsadowing the darker emotions you were expressing.

Much love,
Juliet.

This is super pretty and just great. There's definately growth in your writing, so keep it up! :)

~Anna~ ^_^

I like the last stanza, especially.

this is sweet. I like it... nice job.

I really like the first stanza. The rest is nice too, but I especially like that part.

Oh wow this is really cool. I like it a lot, especially the first stanza. Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^

I like this.. .it's really a sweet little story

really interesting... it made me think... nicely done

I like the interesting math thing in the beginning

very sweet.. I like it... i like the rhyming

very true and well done

aw... very sweet

aw that was so sad and so sweet... beautiful piece... ::hug::

I like the whole eye thing... great job