Although I'm all for hyphens and such, I think that this is a bit too much. Truly, I don't think that anyone can match Emily Dickinson's style. I like the alliteration, though. Nicely done.

What can I say of a piece such as this.

A triumph of technicality.

Very Nicely Done

KEEP WRITING!

F.C

woa.. that is mad alliteration.. amazing job!

Super! stupendous! so sorrowful! solemn! seeking splendor?

indoubtably a good poem!

i liked it, even though i couldn't understand it style is very interesting.n its cool u got so far using only alitteration.