This was completely funny. I can imagine it so well, you have so much detail. I also love the names you give to the unnamed: Cloak and Cupid. Great job!
Bwah! Well it certainly made me laugh and smile :).
Maybe throw a bit more of description in there of Cloak/Cupid and their attire... I've never been to a Renaissance Faire so a description of what one looks like would be neat too. Other than that, you've great story telling skills :)
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