wow... that was really sad, but really awesome. great work!

w00t. Kinda freaky, but I liked the part about the father telling them to go to sleep and find out what happens. Very good.

amazing. bloody amazing

I find it hard to write something so moving in so few words. keep it up.

Beautiful, absalutely beautiful.

I liked that part were the little girls go back to bed, and the Violins, that was a nice touch.

Ok usually I hate anything to do with the Titanic tragedy (blame it on the movie and DiCapprio *sp) but I will give you props. It was interesting enough to keep me reading and you did a good job.