powerfully deep i love the last lines watcher, keeper, guide its just great

Great poem...I really like the last three lines. great job! ~Angel4soul~ps:thanks for the review

does writing so good come naturally to you?

Damn you for being so talented... It reads a little choppy, but I like it nonetheless...

Damn you I suck at this stuff! Ugh, I'll go back to obsessing over what not and feeling sorry for my pulled thigh muscles! (Softball's downfall: Lunges and the pain they leave in your legs)...

Say hi to Ether (if he won't ignore me...)

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